Tuesday, December 3, 2013

AND THEN THE NOISE STOPPED 100 WORD CHALLENGE


            AND THEN THE NOISE STOPPED...

I heard this noise it was freaky 2 hours later it stopped. 4 Days later it was heard again AAH will this noise will ever stop its getting me furious!!! I looked in this book called white-noise I looked in chapter 152 that’s the noise I’ve been hearing for 5 days I bran it home with me when it was night time I looked in the chapter 512 when a noise came out of the book oh my god I said I looked in chapter 4563 there was a sword it came out of the book I killed it splat.
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  1. The PhoenixDecember 8, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    This was an interesting take on the prompt, Leydon. You worked hard to develop a story that would capture the reader.

    Suggestion: Adding punctuation marks would make it easier for the reader to follow your writing.

    Ms. Sargent
    Team 100 WC -- USA

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