As I walked to the rusty broken haunted gate
I saw something white it was a ghost beside the haunted house he was scary. It was staring at my face so I grabbed my pistol and I shot a bullet and I shot it, but I couldn’t shoot it because it was invisible so I ran across the street back to my house. The next night, I went back to the front gate this time I went INSIDE the house then I walked in. I was at the hallway a ghost came behind me and killed me. I’m blood splattered
Hi Shayden,
ReplyDeleteQuite a scary piece of writing! Remember to use the prompt words in the writing. You clearly have a good imagination which is essential for good writing. There were some errors so remember to check your work but if you keep reading and writing a lot you will get much better.
Well done!
Liz Goddard Team 100 WC